Make Me Whole

Here's my first shot at writing a song.. I don't have any kind of a tune in my head, since I can't play any instruments, but here's my shot.


Caught in a vortex of unyielding pain
You scream to me,
Desperately crying out to me to come to the light.
I’m so lost in this darkness, Where is the light?!

A shot in the dark, I feel nothing more
My silent plea, where have you gone?
Have you abandoned me? Was this not hell enough?
Demonic shadows dancing over my body,
Why won’t you save me?

I’m alive, but I can’t feel you
I’m alive, but I can’t see you.
Touch my life, make me whole
I owe you my all, I give you my life.

A hand from nowhere, You stretched out to grab me.
Lost in the depths, Lord you pursue me.
I’m numb with pain, Yet I can feel it slipping away.
Coming back to my senses, The shadows are leaving.

The pain remains, Yet I hold onto You.
Rescued from the Pit,
From the nothingness that has taken over my life.
You show no signs of pain being erased,
Yet I’m drawn to You, and I cannot look away.

I’m alive, I can finally feel you
I’m alive, I can finally see you
Touch my life, make me whole
I owe you my all, I give you my life.

I’m alive, I can finally feel you (Your warm embrace)
I’m alive, I can finally see you (The veil torn away)
Touch my life, make me whole (I need only you)
I owe you my all, I give you my life. (My God, you are mine)